1. I got really good advice from each group member in my group.
Emoni- Said that I did good on the first paper but the second one needed a little work on the 2nd part. She said I needed to fix the wording that I got a little confused there. Other then that I did good.
Lucien- said that I did a good job just to fix my grammar.
Taylor- Taylor was in our group for this but had to leave before my paper was read but she gave good advice to everyone else.
Colleen- It was good overall and met all of the criteria but What exactly was the way they were learning the words in the first article? I am assuming it was a song but it wasn't completely clear. In article two, maybe be a bit more clear about the argument, if it was good or bad. other than that everything was good maybe just elaborate more on the analysis of all of them and the way you would use it.
2. The most helpful advice I got from my group was to make it a little more clear that what my topic really was. and Emoni really helped me with how to fix that problem.
3. The least helpful advice i got would be that some people didnt really help me with my paper like I really wanted to. I was not sure how to do somethings and some people didnt really help me with that.
4. I hope to fix what everyone said and to make my next to papers for this better then the first time. I hope that all the advice I got will help me get a good grade on this and to better my writing.
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