I have no comments for your Annotated Bibliography because you handed in your extra credit draft.
In your Visual Analysis, you added analysis to some of the features of the photos. There are still questions that were unanswered about the meaning behind aspects of the photos to which you had pointed.
In your Argumentative Essay, you are starting to think about how to integrate information from sources in your writing. You need to have fewer opinions and more explanation of your quotations. Also, you did not follow the Toulmin structure nor did you meet the page requirement.
Dear Ashley,
ReplyDeleteI have no comments for your Annotated Bibliography because you handed in your extra credit draft.
In your Visual Analysis, you added analysis to some of the features of the photos. There are still questions that were unanswered about the meaning behind aspects of the photos to which you had pointed.
In your Argumentative Essay, you are starting to think about how to integrate information from sources in your writing. You need to have fewer opinions and more explanation of your quotations. Also, you did not follow the Toulmin structure nor did you meet the page requirement.
Megan