Workshop Reflection

1.What advice did you receive from each member of your group? Explain each person’s advice separately and be specific. 2. What was the most helpful piece of advice you received? Explain. 3. What was the least helpful piece of advice you received? Explain. 4. What are your plans for revision? Be specific. I should be able to understand exactly how your work will change in exactly which places.

1.The advice I received from the members of the group were;
Colleen: grammar, add more in creativity in schools for example: subjects tell what subjects they are. Also thought I had everything that was asked for in the paper.
Emoni: grammar, make it more personnel not just hard facts like I am talking to someone. make people think. 
Lucien: Personality, cut somethings out and make it my own
2. The most helpful piece of advice I received was to make it my own and grammar. I think this is helpful because I need to look over my paper better for grammar mistakes and I like the make it my own because I can put more feelings into my paper. 
3. The least helpful piece of advice I got from my group is nothing. I believe every advice I got from my group was great because I know how to better my paper even more. I believe that with this advice I will make my paper 10 times better. 
4. My plans for revision is to make all the changes that my group members have given me. I will first by going in and fixing all my grammar mistakes, then I will go and add more to the creativity in schools like Colleen said. Then as Emoni said I will take some of the hard facts out and make it personnel. After that I will look over it and get my sister or my mom to look over it so I can catch the grammar.