Reflection from my Group

1. My group members helped me out a lot with this paper they all gave really good ideas for making my paper better. Colleen said that i should talk more about the flowers and the curtains in the background of the second picture. For the first picture she talked about maybe talking more about the butterflies and music notes and what they might mean. She also said do not list my items but talk about everything differently. Emoni talked about  fixing the grammar mistakes i had and what do the pictures mean and what the main idea was and how i could show that in my paper. Lucien said that maybe i could say that the creativity was dying out of the schools and how and why it is.
2. The most helpful piece of advice i received was not listing the things i saw but talk about everything differently and looking more into it.
3. The least helpful advice i received was i do not think anything i received was bad i think everything will help me maybe not now but later in life. I wish we could talk more about the papers so we can all do better.
4. I hope to do everything that my group has said above and i hope to look more into it so i can find the meaning and the main idea so i can make it clear in my paper. I hope that after i do everything my group said then i believe i will have a better paper then i would if i did not have there help.